​tulips in bloom editorial provides professional-level edits to querying, traditional, and indie writers. We provide concrete, actionable feedback to enhance the author's vision. Our suggestions are always craft-centered to prioritize effective storytelling mechanics. ​
How We're Different:
Consult & Brainstorm Sessions
Submission Material
Book for a consultation to discuss the level of edit your manuscript requires.
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We offer 'add-on' brainstorming sessions for new or current clients. In this session, we will unlock sticky areas in your manuscript.
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Think you have writer's block? All you need is a brainstorming session with our experienced editor to get you and your story back on track.
Developmental Edits
The goal of the developmental edit is to provide the writer with constructive and actionable feedback to revise and enhance the manuscript's storytelling and commercial potential. The editor will focus on both creative execution and market readiness. This includes a full manuscript read-through, detailed edit letter, and in-line comments.
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The main areas of focus:
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Plot and structure
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Characterization and development of character arcs
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Immersive setting and world-building
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Concept, premise, and hook
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Marketability and genre positioning
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Pacing
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Immersive narrative voice and interiority
Our editor has seven years of experience in literary agent submission and perfected the formula for success.
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The elevator pitch, log-line, query letter, and synopsis do not have to be daunting. With our perfected formula, you will revise for a professional, stand-out submission.
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We pride ourselves on our high success rate!
Line Edits
The goal of the line edit is to strengthen the narrative point of view and voice, clarify sentence structure, specify word choice for tone and characterization, enhance emotional depth, maintain the story propulsion, improve pace, and overall polish the readability of the prose.
Published Clients!
The Winter Charlatan by Victoria McCombs
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Book Three in The Storyteller's Series by bestselling author of Oathbound.
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"A queen raised in the shadows, and a fraud prince who needs her help. The sole heir to the kingdom is destined to sleep for a hundred years."
